Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in
one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
Age group Female Male
0 – 9 51.3 50.3
10 – 17 42.2 24.6
18 – 39 17.1 9.7
40 – 59 12.3 8.0
60+ 18.5 13.2
The table illustrates information about the proportion of the population for five age groups who rode bicycles starting in 2011.
Overall, what stands out from the table is that the share of female as higher than of male. Another interesting point is that the percentage of female registered the highest figure for age group from 0 to 9 in 2011.
Looking at the detail, as for age group from 0 to ̣9 and over ̉60, it witnessed a significant numerous people who rode bicycles in female. The percentage of female in 0 to 9 age group was 51.3% , which means that it used far less than the other groups.Meanwhile, the share of male on this age group accounted for 50,3%. 42,2 % female in 10 to 17 age group used bicycles, this figure was almost as high 2 fold than male. There were 18,5 % female in over 60 who rode bicycles, compared to the figure for male, at 13,2%. On the other hand, if we look at the percentage of female in 18 to 19 age group was 17,1%, which was much higher than that of male, equivalent to 9,7. There were 12,3% the share of female in 40 to 59 age group, whereas that of male just accounted for 8,0%. This figure was the lowest that male who rode bicycles in 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of female in 0 to 9 age group was 51.3% , which means that it used far less than ...
^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
... it used far less than the other groups.Meanwhile, the share of male on this age group ac...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, whereas, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34684684685 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43717707579 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472972972973 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9380650635 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455521364785 0.215688989381 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204793194279 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053454373757 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288831915618 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102811908383 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.