Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of 65 years old and over citizens in USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, it is noticeable that the proportion of population aged 65 and older in three countries is increasing during this period. The USA had higher percentage of mature citizens than other countries before it started declining and rank last in the last year. Furthermore, although Japan's elderly population quantity decreased slightly for the first 40 years, it rises significantly and overpasses two other countries, which used to be higher in the number of old citizens from 1940 to 2030.
As can be seen obviously, in 1940, percentages of ageing population were less than 10% for all countries. Between 1940 and 1980, while USA and Sweden went up to nearly 15%, Japan reached the bottom at about 2.5%. In the next 20 years, the old population in the USA declined gradually until 1999, at nearly 15% and kept stable for the rest of this period. Conversely, that referring to Sweden and japan have increased sharply for their last years, surpass the USA to become the highest and second highest among the total, at over 25%, which nearly 4 times higher than it used to be in initial year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81339712919 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54730658961 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0733235163 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140251930988 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755853651266 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594902610469 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104268943754 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132153807202 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.