The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001
The three circular charts compare the total expendure of five different amounts for Uk school in three year : 1981, 1991, and 2001. The data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that in year 1981 a tiny fraction used by insurance .Furthermore, teachers were spending on salaries with one forth, and less than fifth was being consumed on furniture and euipment. Moreover, resouces had used with less than fifth, and more than quater had to spend on other workers salaries. However, half salaries were spend by teachers in the year 1991, and one in twenty were spending on furniture ,and equipment. As well as resouces, other worker salaries, and insurance were being consumed with a fifth, more than a fifth, and large tiny portion respectively.
As far as trend was concerned that in the year 2001 more than two fifths was spend on teachers salaries , and less than a guater had spend on furniture, and equipment . Mostely , less than one in ten ,less than fifth , and more than one in twenty had been used by resources, other workers salaries , and insurance.
Overall , it is evident that in three charts noticed that insurance was slighting increase at the end of point. While, the maximum teachers salaries on total school was spending in the year of 1991.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91891891892 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55810230764 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495495495495 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 0.482926829268 2278% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.982495494 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170493286858 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876873863909 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100176156395 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143763614319 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093260407786 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.