TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST POPULATION
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Country
2000
Population
2019
Population
2050
Expected Pop.
Growth Pop %
2000 - 2019
1
China
1,268,301,605
1,420,062,022
1,301,627,048
11.9 %
2
India
1,006,300,297
1,368,737,513
1,656,553,632
36.0 %
3
United States
282,162,411
329,093,110
398,328,349
16.6 %
4
Indonesia
214,090,575
269,536,482
300,183,166
25.9 %
5
Brazil
174,315,386
212,392,717
232,304,177
21.8 %
6
Pakistan
152,429,036
204,596,442
290,847,790
34.2 %
7
Nigeria
123,945,463
200,962,417
391,296,754
62.1 %
8
Bangladesh
128,734,672
168,065,920
193,092,763
30.5 %
9
Russia
147,053,966
143,895,551
129,908,086
- 2.2 %
10
Mexico
99,775,434
132,328,035
150,567,503
32.6 %
TOP TEN Countries
3,597,108,845
4,449,670,209
5,044,709,268
23.7 %
Rest of the World
2,547,898,144
3,266,553,000
4,329,774,957
28.2 %
TOTAL World Population
6,145,006,989
7,716,223,209
9,374,484,225
25.6 %
<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height:150%"><span style="color:black">Overpopulation has become one of the most <b>concerning</b>
issues facing countries today <b>because in</b> an interconnected and
interdependent world, each country should be responsible for limiting their
populations. This essay agrees totally with this initiative because of
the environmental and health problems caused by overpopulation.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""> The primary reason why becoming the causes of
several contagious diseases are inevitably connect to the population growth
worldwide in particular, small, fragile and conflict-affected countries, such
as sub Saharan Africa and the least developed Asian nations. Overpopulation can impact tremendously on
poverty rate, malnutrition and sanitation a lot. Take America for instance, a
person uses 160 gallons water while in Africa or India they only use 5 gallons
of water per day. As a result, the water scarcity and lack of food are
resulting in several contagious diseases and ailments including cholera, mumps
as well as chicken pox. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"">The second main reason
is that if we do not take into consideration to eliminate overpopulation, we
will face some difficulties in environmental areas. In the world, one in three
humans drive a car, burn a charcoal or coal, use too much electricity and also
throw wastes a lot. It will bring many side effects explicitly, connecting to
rapid increase in the atmosphere of methane, carbon dioxide and greenhouse gas
emissions. One of the most obvious example that shows global warming in our
planet. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"">In conclusion, however
some people will argue overpopulation is not the primary reason to tackle these
issues, I believe that eliminating the growth of population would be the
alternative choice, which has not only drawbacks of health issues but also,
promotes the environmental disasters too. It is recommended that, the most
significant solutions would be progressively empowering women and girls about
the reproductive system as well as substantially eliminating dumping and
minimizing the release of chemicals in the air. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:
12.0pt;margin-left:0in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";
color:black"> The primary causes of several contagious diseases are
inevitably connected to the population growth worldwide. Overpopulation can
impact tremendously on poverty rate, malnutrition and sanitation. This happens
particularly in small, fragile and conflict-affected countries, such as sub
Saharan Africa and the least developed Asian nations. Take Africa or India for
instance, they only use 5 gallons of water while in America a person uses
160 gallons of water per day. As a result, the water scarcity and lack of food
result in several contagious diseases and ailments including cholera, mumps as
well as chicken pox.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";
mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:
12.0pt;margin-left:0in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";
color:black">The second main issue is that if we do not take into consideration
eliminating overpopulation, we will face some difficulties in environmental
areas. Globally, one in three humans drive cars, burn charcoal or coal,
use too much electricity and also throw away a lot of waste. This will bring
many side effects explicitly, connected to rapid increase in the atmosphere of
methane, carbon dioxide and greenhouse gas emissions. Some of the most obvious
examples that show global warming in our planet.</span><span style="font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:
12.0pt;margin-left:0in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";
color:black">In conclusion, however, while some people will argue that
overpopulation is not the primary reason for tackling these issues, I believe
that eliminating the growth of population would be the best choice, because it
has not only drawbacks of health issues but also promotes the environmental
disasters. I would recommend that the most significant solutions for
overpopulation would be progressively empowering women and girls about the
reproductive system as well as substantially eliminating dumping of waste and
minimizing the release of chemicals in the air. </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-fareast-font-family:
"Times New Roman""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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- The chart below gives demographic information about the ten most populated countries from 2000 to the present as well as the projected population in 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rel 78
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST POPULATION#Country2000Population2019Population2050Expected Pop.Growth Pop %2000 - 20191China1,268,301,6051,420,062,0221,301,627,04811.9 %2India1,006,300,2971,368,737,5131,656,553,63236.0 %3United States282,162,411329,093 11
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 6.8 382% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 3.97073170732 529% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5742.0 965.302439024 595% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 646.0 196.424390244 329% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.88854489164 4.92477711251 180% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0414809386 3.73543355544 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.9531435051 2.65546596893 412% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 255.0 106.607317073 239% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394736842105 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1506.6 283.868780488 531% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.45097560976 159% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.07073170732 654% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 285.946317338 43.030603864 665% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 302.210526316 112.824112599 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 71.0 3.83414634146 1852% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 1.69756097561 1532% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0111980515024 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00393617097778 0.103423049105 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00755508884271 0.0843802449381 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00546362719648 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157964375601 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.4 13.2329268293 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.25 61.2550243902 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 10.3012195122 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 34.87 11.4140731707 306% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 40.7170731707 341% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 37.0 11.4329268293 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 37.0 11.0658536585 334% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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