Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

overpopulation has become one of the most concerning issues facing countries today because in an interconnected and interdependent world, each country should be responsible for limiting their populations. this essay agrees totally with this initiative because of the environmental and health problems caused by overpopulation.

The primary reason why becoming the causes of several contagious diseases are inevitably connected to the population growth worldwide in particular, small, fragile and conflict-affected countries, such as sub saharan africa and the least developed asian nations. overpopulation can impact tremendously on poverty rate, malnutrition and sanitation a lot. take america for instance, a person uses 160 gallons water while in africa or india they only use 5 gallons of water per day. As a result, the water scarcity and lack of food are resulting in several contagious diseases and ailments including cholera, mumps as well as chicken pox.

The second main reason is that if we do not take into consideration to eliminate overpopulation, we will face some difficulties in environmental areas. In the world, one in three humans drive a car, burn a charcoal or coal, use too much electricity and also throw wastes a lot. it will bring many side effects explicitly, connecting to rapid increase in the atmosphere of methane, carbon dioxide and greenhouse gas emissions. one of the most obvious example that shows global warming in our planet.

In conclusion, however some people will argue overpopulation is not the primary reason to tackle these issues, I believe that eliminating the growth of population would be the alternative choice, which has not only drawbacks of health issues but also, promotes the environmental disasters too. it is recommended that, the most significant solutions would be progressively empowering women and girls about the reproductive system as well as substantially eliminating dumping and minimizing the release of chemicals in the air.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 965.302439024 177% => OK
No of words: 307.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55374592834 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28284792111 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 106.607317073 186% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644951140065 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 283.868780488 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6370491584 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.083333333 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0626576433853 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211114728634 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406530718368 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416314193794 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548948238295 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 40.7170731707 233% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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