two charts
The charts give information about the main triggers for the decrease in the productivity in agriculture and its impacts on three regions namely North America, Europe and Oceania in 1990.
It is clear that deforestation and over-grazing were responsible for the degradation of worldwide land. And Europe was the region where the proportion of land degradation was highest.
The percentage of over-grazing accounted for 35% of the reasons that degraded the land, was five times as much as that of the other causes. Triggers by deforestation and over-cultivation that led to land degradation occupied 30% and 28%, respectively.
Europe experienced the percentage of total land degraded by the reasons mentioned above was highest, at 23%. whereas, the proportion of land degradation in North America was the lowest, at only 5%. And the figure for Oceania was at the medium rate, while this region was not affected by over-cultivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35135135135 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24785707854 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4880929877 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0253148193876 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116744220516 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308876174489 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233488441031 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404413842846 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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