The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps compare the changes of an island. the first one is before and the second one is after the establishment for tourism.
In general terms, there are significant changes after the island was renovated. Not only lots of facilities are built in the island, the sea is used for activities. The island become good better for tourism.
Looking first at the one before the island are built, it have just trees in the East and West and many empty land. Besides, the sea arround the island.
Moving on to the second map, the empty land in the island was developed into accommodations in the West and center of the island. Between them, they built a restaurant in the North and a reception central, many trees still remained. in addition, the pier was built where people can go sailing in the South sea of the island. Furthermore, tourist can swim in the beach near the West of the island.
- The pie charts and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25 year olds in London during yhr 1990s and 2010s and the availability of different types of accommodation in London during the same two periods 79
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 61
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- the diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... maps compare the changes of an island. the first one is before and the second one ...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...the one before the island are built, it have just trees in the East and West and man...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun land seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much empty land', 'a good deal of empty land'.
Suggestion: much empty land; a good deal of empty land
...ave just trees in the East and West and many empty land. Besides, the sea arround the island. ...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ion central, many trees still remained. in addition, the pier was built where peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, still, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59119496855 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4305389281 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7341763857 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3636363636 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213955086679 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932499754444 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609190024415 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143438784531 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463715948974 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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