The two diagrams illustrate the highway designing of an urban hospital between 2007 and 2010.
It can be clearly seen that the location of the various car park was separated after reconstruction. Overall, there were two circuit roads instead of the crossroad in 2010.
Before the renovated plan, there was a crossroad connected with city road and hospital road. Bus stops placed along both sides of the hospital road. After that, the crossroad was eliminated as well as replaced by the roundabout, which accessed to city road, hospital road and a new bus station. Also, it was available to the ring road by the second roundabout.
In 2007, there was just a car park, which opened for staff and public, set on the right side of the bus stops, vehicle drivers should attend via the entrance on ring road. By the road reestablishment, staffs were able to park their vehicles with no public used since 2010. It was because there was an independent car park for staff on the original place as well as a public car park was designed for public nearly to the right side of the city hospital.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 73
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.to what extent do you agree with this view? 78
- The pie charts beloww show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70680628272 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52376658364 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4144902178 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164993662128 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861945707088 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562124855285 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117107362927 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500526174808 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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