There are two maps here, the first map presents the road to a city hospital in 2007 while the second shows the road access in 2010. There are lots of common part but has a huge difference in these two maps.
Many buildings and roads remained the same during these three years. The city hospital was alwarys in the north of these two maps and there was a Ring Road around this hospital. The Hospital Road was in the City Hospital's southern direction. There was a car park in the east of Hospital Road and in the south of this road, there was a City Road from west to east.
However, there was lots of change after 2007. A bus station was built in the west of Hospital Road after 2007. Due to the building of this bus station, two roundabouts replaced the old two crossroads joining Hospital Road with Ring Road and City Road. Moreover, an new car park was built in the east of City Hospital. In 2007, the only one cark was open for both staff and public. However, in 2010, the old car park only opened for staff and the new car park was open for the public.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 67
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 56
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...with Ring Road and City Road. Moreover, an new car park was built in the east of C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26237623762 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00367885354 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440594059406 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.379429261 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257928594777 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119327365293 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104047984727 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224725691363 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805397916381 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 8.06136585366 76% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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