Many people think that it will cause both serious social problems and practical problems when living in a foreign country and speaking a foreign language. I think it's really correct for people who don't expect in this kind of foreign language.
Language is very important for people to communicate and contact with other people. People cannot live alone and don't communicate with others all the time. If a person is not familiar with the foreign language used in the place he lives, he will feel very hard to express his idea and is very easily misunderstood by others. It is very difficult for him to make up friends with local people. And it is very hard for a person to overcome the language problem individually, he may feel very lonely and suffer from social problems.
People with a poor foreign language skill may also suffer from many practical problems. As language is used anywhere in our daily life. If you want to buy food in the restaurant, you need to talk with the waiters. If you want to buy daily goods in the supermarket, you need to know the words' meaning of all kinds of goods. People will be very tired if they do not have a good foreign language skill. Such as for me, I just came to Hong Kong for about one year and cannot speak Cantoness at all, I will be confused if I talk with some local people as I do not know the meaning of their words. I seldom ask other people about the road because they do not understand me and I do not get their words too. I will find the items in supermarkets myself rather than ask for other people. It is a really big problem for me. I also have many friends from mainland China, and they face these problems too. These problems are very small but really practical and annoying.
In conclusion, language skill is very important in daily life. People who come to a foreign country but are not familiar with this country's language will face many serious problems as well as practical problems.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 67
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 56
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...think its really correct for people who dont expect in this kind of foreign language...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...er people. People cannot live alone and dont communicate with others all the time. I...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so suffer from many practical problems. As language is used anywhere in our daily ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, well, as for, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51549295775 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36199156769 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43661971831 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1212840266 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.15 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289095661912 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943375207033 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107049158508 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218649248435 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907396162621 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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