The given maps provide information on the changes in the public facility to the city hospital over a three year period from 2007.
It can seen from the graph that there was a significant changes took place within short period. Firstly, there were two round about made by the authority in 2010. Interestingly, the six bus stops were replaced by large bus station and parking slot for the staff between 2007 and 2010. Also they newly made a public car parking area exctly on the right side of the hospital where people can easily assess to this medical centre. At the same time, there was another change also took place, the bus waiting shelterin front of the hospital hospital road had competently replaced and constructed a huge bus station and will connects both round about for a better accessibility for the pulbic.
In contrast, there was no remarkable change in terms of both city hospital building and also roads such as city road, hospital road and ring road.
All in all, it is clear from the graph that there was a remarkable changes took place and they especially focused on a better parking facilities in the hospital surveillance both staff and public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...three year period from 2007. It can seen from the graph that there was a signifi...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
... the graph that there was a significant changes took place within short period. Firstly...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ot for the staff between 2007 and 2010. Also they newly made a public car parking ar...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: hospital
... the bus waiting shelterin front of the hospital hospital road had competently replaced and const...
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Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'connect'
Suggestion: connect
...constructed a huge bus station and will connects both round about for a better accessibi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a better accessibility for the pulbic. In contrast, there was no remarkable cha...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...m the graph that there was a remarkable changes took place and they especially focused ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, in contrast, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81188118812 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43084934264 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0975712487 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183643715954 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832702005456 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636151177185 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124705969154 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066195427078 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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