The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps depict the road to get to the hospital in 2007 and 2009.
Overall, there are some noticeable changes in the car park, bus stop and the implementation of a few roundabouts to control traffic.

The most striking change is in the car park, where parking place for the public has been separated from the staff parking and has been moved to the East side of the hospital, with easy access to the ring road. Previously the bus stoppage used to be by the hospital road, that is moved to the West side of the hospital having two access road from the roundabout, establishing easy access from both of the roundabouts.

Another major alteration has been made to the layout of the roads. Two roundabouts have been built, one at the junction of hospital road and ring road and another at the junction of city road and hospital road.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58620689655 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55991230528 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9214026841 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17419364338 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945125195359 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092180418989 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116110364132 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961245024188 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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