Some people think that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive developments. Others say it can cause the loss of national identities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
According to some people some business and cultural contact between countries will help the country in a positive way. However others argue that this can be detrimental to the country's nationality. I think, this would bring economic development to the country.
On one side,, increasing trade with other countries means exchanging of products between countries. If one country imports something that does not integrate with the culture then this can make negative impact. This can also happen for importing services as well. For example, by broadcasting too many Indian TV channels to Bangladesh, people became addicted to certain TV program. Young generation specially school students are effected by this and this also caused them to score lower grades.
On the other hand, Importing necessary goods also help to develop other economic sectors as well. Like, Bangladesh imports electricity from India which is essential to the garments industry. Beside that no country can produce everything they need. This is specially applicable to energy sector. For example, China imports natural gas from Russia, what is impossible for them to produce. So in this scenario china has no option but procure gas from outside of the country. Thinking of nationality will only bar any potential economic development. Therefore international relation benefits the economic development of any country.
In conclusion, the drawback globalization brings in undeniable but the economic benefits it brings along with it is greater than it's drawbacks. I believe, every nation should open it's door to all countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48987854251 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80174814242 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635627530364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6214729581 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7222222222 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207117905432 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621444885423 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726211553112 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138973051975 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102160920859 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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