water use in many purposes in 6 countries
The pie charts illustrates water consumption for various purposes in 6 different regions all over the world.
Overall, it is obvious that water is used for agricultural needs that overshadow other purposes, except in Europe and North America. In addition, domestic use take the smallest percentage compared to other demands.
Firstly, look at the figures of agricultural use, we can see Africa and Central Asia consume much more water than the other regions, with 84% and 88%, respectively. Following by South East Asia (81%), South America ( 71%), two other countries take only below 40% in use. In terms of industrial use, Europe and North America observe the striking percentage, with 53% and 48%, in turn, while Africa and Central Asia take only 5% to 7%.
According to the chart, needs in domestic use is small. The highest nation is North America at 19%, while other countries are just under 15%.
- Spend money on railways than roads 73
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 67
- Agricultural development has positive impacts on human being, however, there still remains starvation in many regions all over the world. Although this could result in many issues, solutions can be taken to alleviate. 67
- Small town Islip and plans for its developments 84
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'consumes'.
Suggestion: consumes
...use, we can see Africa and Central Asia consume much more water than the other regions,...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng by South East Asia 81%, South America 71%, two other countries take only below...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54143441562 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5239647355 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246175656874 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103172022618 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304160668879 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142948501508 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120597628302 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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