Writing task 1 with image
The chart given illustrates how many tourists utilizing three leading airports in New York City over the course of 6 years starting in 1995.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that there was an upward trend for the number of people traveling with these airports, with the exception of travelers from John F.Kennedy airport. It is also noted that the number of travelers using LaGuardia airport registered the highest figure.
In 1995, the number of tourists using LaGuardia stood at approximately 35 million passengers. This figure then went up progressively to 50 million passengers in 1999, before increasing sharply to the highest number of travellers (nearly 70 million passengers in 2000). A similar trend was witnessed in Newark, which increased marginally from 15 million passengers in 1995 to 43 million passengers in 1998. However, this figure then remained stable at 43 million passengers over the next three years.
There was also a similar trend of travellers using John F.Kennedy to the others, which rose progressively from 27 million of passengers in 1995 to the highest number of travellers in 1997 (47 million of passengers). Nevertheless, this figure declined slightly over the next two years to 32 million of travellers in 1999, before witnessing a significant recovery period to 43 million of travellers in 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...f people traveling with these airports, with the exception of travelers from John F.Kennedy airport. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kennedy
... the exception of travelers from John F.Kennedy airport. It is also noted that the numb...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kennedy
...imilar trend of travellers using John F.Kennedy to the others, which rose progressively...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90038075169 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7834175724 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0249406820108 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0120099016212 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339691315109 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0206085997197 0.15604864568 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356951417874 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.