Writing Task 1 - Mixed Chart
The table illustrates where the money of the police budget originated from and the pie chart demonstrates the distribution of this budget in a certain region of the UK between 2017 and 2018.Overall, the amount of money in the police budget increased over a year. Furthermore, it is noticeable that Salaries accounted for the largest proportion of the budget spent.
A slight increase from 304,7m to 318,6m was recorded in the total amount of the Police Budget. In 2017, the income from National Government was the highest, at 175,5m, which was 84m & 137m greater than that from Local Taxes and Other sources. After a year, The revenue from National Government rose gently by 2,3 m and the figures for Local Texas & Other sources also experienced a similar trend, growing minimally to 102,3 m and 318,6 m respectively.
The proportion of money allocated to Salaries made up a significant part of the total budget spent, at 75%, which was nine times as much as that of Technology at 8 %. Meanwhile, The percentage of spending on Buildings and Transport was marginally higher than the number on Technology, at almost a fifth. In 2018, The data on Salaries declined to 60%, but it was still by far the greatest proportion. The percentage of the budget spent on Tech climbed to 14%, still the smallest portion, whereas the figure for Buildings & Transport remained unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Overall
... region of the UK between 2017 and 2018.Overall, the amount of money in the police budg...
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Suggestion:
...est proportion of the budget spent. A slight increase from 304,7m to 318,6m ...
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Suggestion:
... sources. After a year, The revenue from National Government rose gently by 2,3 m...
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Suggestion:
...ed a similar trend, growing minimally to 102,3 m and 318,6 m respectively. ...
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... 102,3 m and 318,6 m respectively. The proportion of money allocated to Sal...
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... which was nine times as much as that of Technology at 8 %. Meanwhile, The percen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97826086957 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82976015811 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.896358016 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.222222222 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0149850824066 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.004905061996 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.013873610398 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0124368978321 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017588429588 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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