The charts compare the average Australian daily power consumption divided into six portions, the first diagram displays the amount of household energy usage whereas the second one shows regarding greenhouse released by utilizing the energy.
Overall we can nearly see about the same percent of water heating in both the pictures, at the same time we can observe the major change in the heating and other appliances. There is a minor change in the remaining proportions like cooling, lighting, water heating, refrigerator. With the small amount of usage in cooling and lighting.
Looking first at one household using energy saw a heating and water heating make up the majority of 42% and 30%. Cooling, lighting, other appliances, refrigerator combined only makes up the small proportion which is equal to water heating being at 30%. Cooling and lighting is the least usage by the citizens of the country. Moving on to the second graph consisting of greenhouse energy saw a water heating and other appliances shows the biggest share at 32% and 28% with fluctuation in remaining heating drops to 15%, refrigerator rise to 14%, other appliances to 28%, while others pick up in few numbers. Finally, the citizens of Australia also uses lightning and cooling in less amount approximately 11% in total.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...nge in the heating and other appliances.There is a minor change in the remaining prop...
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Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
..., lighting, water heating, refrigerator.With the small amount of usage in cooling an...
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Line 6, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p the small proportion which is equal to water heating being at 30%.Cooling and l...
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Line 6, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Cooling
...is equal to water heating being at 30%.Cooling and lighting is the least usage by the ...
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Line 6, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s shows the biggest share at 32% and 28% with fluctuation in remaining heating dr...
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Line 6, column 519, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uation in remaining heating drops to 15% ,refrigerator rise to 14% , other applian...
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Line 6, column 545, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g drops to 15% ,refrigerator rise to 14% , other appliances to 28%, while others p...
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Line 6, column 594, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...appliances to 28%, while others pick up to few numbers.Finally, the citizens of Au...
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Line 6, column 609, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...8%, while others pick up to few numbers.Finally, the citizens of Australia also uses li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, look, regarding, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25961538462 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00274974521 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.3952770929 43.030603864 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.8 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.6 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0118135426514 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00838084943376 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167616988675 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0139680823896 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197538515557 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.2329268293 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 61.2550243902 49% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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