Writing Task1 Cambridge10 Test1 (Pie chart)
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions, which utilise for six purposes such as water heating, heating, cooling, lighting, refrigeration, and other appliances by Australian household.
It is clear that heating account for the largest proportion of the energy use while Australian household save energy on lighting. On the other hand, water heating makes up the biggest proportion of the greenhouse gas emissions, but they seldom use power in cooling.
The first chart shows that there is a significant figure for heating and water heating, just over two-fifths and almost a third respectively. By contrast, the energy for cooling is 40% far from the most important purpose.
Turning to the second char, we can see that greenhouse gas emissioms contribute the largest demand, namely water heating(32%),which is 4% higher than other appliances. On the other hand, the least energy is cooling, merely 3%,which is 1% higher than power used in household.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, third, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38853503185 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93336824757 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.453470306 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0437389870267 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204937505279 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336449614823 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324511402457 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365445902722 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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