Two pie charts below give information about average energy consumption by Australian household and greenhouse emissions released in consequence of this energy utilization.
All in all, while majority of energy consumption belongs to the field of heating, its greenhouse gas emissions are not too high. in addition, other appliances energy consumption is too small. In contrast this sector greenhouse gas emissions are surprisingly noticeable.
In terms of energy use by Australian household, vast amount of the energy consumption is in field of heating and water heating, at 42% and 30% respectively. While cooling and lighting energy utilization is not considerable, at 2% and 4% respectively. Other appliances consumes 15% of energy of the whole, which is double that of refrigeration.
Considering greenhouse gas emissions chart, water heating and other appliances emit more than half of the whole greenhouse emission, at 32% and 28% respectively. Heating and refrigeration release the same amount of greenhouse gas emission, about three in twenty. Cooling greenhouse effect compromises 3%, which is relatively half of lighting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73529411765 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28554030359 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1079506306 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0379487782948 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0147612122971 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031944757317 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323240889509 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413386946728 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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