Yemen and Italy's population
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of three different age groups in population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
It is clear that the rate of residents aged 15-59 years old in these two nations are mostly highest in two research years. Additionally, people from 60+ years old group in Italy have the much higher percentage than that of Yemen.
The 0-14 year old people in Yemen made up the highest proportion in 2000, at 50.1%, whereas just 3.6% of Yemen’s population were 60+ years old. Besides, the figure of 15-59 year old group accounted for an impressive rate of nearly 50% in 2000 and is expected to rise considerably to 57.3% in 2050. In contrast, there is an forecast for the proportion of the youngest group of Yemen to decline significantly to 37% in 2050.
Similarly, in Italy, the highest rate in population also belongs to the 15-59 year old group. Specifically, in 2000, 61.6% of Italy’s population were from 15 to 59 and the percentage of people aged 0-14 and 60+ years old were 14.3% and 24.1% respectively. While the figure for the oldest group is predicted to double to 42.3% in 2050, there is a expectation for the rate of 15-59 year old people to decrease dramatically to 46.2% in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74605652642 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481818181818 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2676799259 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230143469511 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114426258581 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100418941505 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16593811144 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568014856433 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.