You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Han,
Today, I am writing for you to complain about something. my family and me are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. Now I'm not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Firstly, I found that the rooms in the house are really old. they are have dust and spider web. There are places have been drawn zigzag.
Secondly, the chairs and the tables are almost like broken. they are tottered when I sat.
Therefore, the lights are very bad. they may suddenly off when nobody touch.
I really boring with something. my family is say those things with the manager of the house.
I only share with you about things .
Hope you hear from you soon,
Tran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ng for you to complain about something. my family and me are living in rented acco...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ion in an English-speaking country. Now Im not satisfied with the condition of som...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... Im not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Firstly, I found that the ...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... the rooms in the house are really old. they are have dust and spider web. There are...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...s in the house are really old. they are have dust and spider web. There are places h...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... and the tables are almost like broken. they are tottered when I sat. Therefore, t...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
.... Therefore, the lights are very bad. they may suddenly off when nobody touch. I...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'touches'.
Suggestion: touches
... bad. they may suddenly off when nobody touch. I really boring with something. my f...
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Line 11, column 33, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ouch. I really boring with something. my family is say those things with the man...
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Line 13, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...se. I only share with you about things . Hope you hear from you soon, Tran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 585.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75609756098 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46086697835 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.4281055835 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.7857142857 112.824112599 37% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.78571428571 22.9334400587 38% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260107358293 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740198105666 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890961760475 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110208594381 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123261522115 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 13.2329268293 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.28 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.1 10.3012195122 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.55 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 11.4329268293 26% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.