You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall.
You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall.
Write a letter to the manager. In the letter:
describe what the group does
explain why the group is good for the community
suggest alternative days and times for practice
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to ask your permission regarding the use of community hall for our music sessions. We are a band of five friends and been using the auditorium for the last three years. We play jazz and opera twice a week on every Tuesday and Friday. Our practice continues for only four hours in the evening. It is a sort of free of cost concert where the general public has an open invitation.
I am sure that the audience enjoys the music and it is cheap entertainment for them. As you know, in our small town people do not have many recreational activities. So, our opera sessions are a source of enjoyment for the residents.
Unfortunately, I came to know about the recent notification. According to which we are not allowed to use the hall on the days we used to jam. I request you to find an alternate way. I am sure that if we shift to Wednesday and Saturday evening, it will not be a problem for you too. Please permit us to play our music on these days from 5 pm to 7 pm.
I hope your response at your earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
Wajeeha Umer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to ask your per...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... sort of free of cost concert where the general public has an open invitation. I am sure...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... source of enjoyment for the residents. Unfortunately, I came to know about the ...
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Line 19, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liest. Yours Sincerely, Wajeeha Umer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, sort of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4039408867 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58898748012 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635467980296 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0791873533 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.6 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16932406027 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485454263223 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468624885868 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867982480232 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582446944581 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.2329268293 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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