You are planning to take a vacation.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
•describe the vacation spot you have chosen
•explain how you plan to spend your time there
•invite your friend to join you on your vacation
Begin your letter as follows
How r you? Hope you are having a great time with your boyfriend.I miss you too much.
Do you remember our plans for a vacation together?Hmm,it took me many months to plan it.You remember ,once you told me that you would like to visit Switzerland.And to your surprise,I have chosen the same as our vacation spot.Before I was not in a position to afford it.I am very happy to tell you that I have got a promotion last month.So now I'm in a stand to afford it.As we are having Christmas holidays starting from December 20 ,I'm planning to travel that time.I will be very happy if you could join me for the same.Either you can come to Doha or you can directly meet at your dream destination.Please let me know ,if you are ok with these dates.
Hope to see you soon dear.
With Love
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...having a great time with your boyfriend.I miss you too much. Do you remember ...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
....I miss you too much. Do you remember our plans for a vacation together?Hmm,it...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hmm
...mber our plans for a vacation together?Hmm,it took me many months to plan it.You r...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...r our plans for a vacation together?Hmm,it took me many months to plan it.You reme...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: You
...r?Hmm,it took me many months to plan it.You remember ,once you told me that you wou...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...k me many months to plan it.You remember ,once you told me that you would like to ...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: And
...hat you would like to visit Switzerland.And to your surprise,I have chosen the same...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...o visit Switzerland.And to your surprise,I have chosen the same as our vacation sp...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Before
...ve chosen the same as our vacation spot.Before I was not in a position to afford it.I ...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve chosen the same as our vacation spot.Before I was not in a position to afford it.I ...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: I
...re I was not in a position to afford it.I am very happy to tell you that I have g...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: So
... that I have got a promotion last month.So now Im in a stand to afford it.As we ar...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... have got a promotion last month.So now Im in a stand to afford it.As we are havin...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...month.So now Im in a stand to afford it.As we are having Christmas holidays starti...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...stmas holidays starting from December 20 ,Im planning to travel that time.I will b...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...mas holidays starting from December 20 ,Im planning to travel that time.I will be ...
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Suggestion: I
...ber 20 ,Im planning to travel that time.I will be very happy if you could join me...
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Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Either
...happy if you could join me for the same.Either you can come to Doha or you can directl...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...directly meet at your dream destination.Please let me know ,if you are ok with these d...
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Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...our dream destination.Please let me know ,if you are ok with these dates. Hope ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 639.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37671232877 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74028247774 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678082191781 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.685722459 43.030603864 580% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.75 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395321544732 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210121606998 0.103423049105 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131796021844 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269913963849 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112144265364 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.