In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that government should have the responsibility. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, children have a bad habit of eating daily, so they are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that governments are responsible for solving this problem. I agree with this statement, so I would like to give my own perspective.
On the one hand, students have a lot of extra classes every day, so they do not have enough time to have lunch or dinner at home. Children and students are more likely to eat fast food than healthy food that can be prepared at home by themselves. It is a reason why they become overweight because fast food includes lots of fat and material which makes people increase their weight quickly and lose control. The second reason is that teenagers are addicted to going to the milk tea or coffee shop frequently to drink soft drinks or milktea. This is very unhealthy because they are addicted to milktea. In addition, the main reason is some children are very lazy to join outside activities or do exercise because they spend a lot of time using social media and forget doing exercise to maintain good health and keep in shape. Actually, some young people lack knowledge about eating properly such as just eating three main meals in a day or just eat enough nutrients for their bodies.
In conclusion, there are a lot of children who are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Therefore, I think the government should hold many activities orbuild more facilities for children like a park and organize a series of talks about health and weight for teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, second, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52841836101 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0177271533 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257170329049 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931013190401 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664323798247 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190542671919 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436367922759 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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