n many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that government should have the responsibility. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Many children’s now days are becoming overweight and unhealthy, some people believe that government are responsible for it because they do not run health campaigns.From my perspective parents are responsible for it because they do not focus on their children’s diet and daliy exerise.i will discus it in details.
It seems clear that Children get weight and becoming unhealthy because of their eating habits , where as gaurdian’s must look after their children’s diet. Heaving less calories meals and colddrinks including fastood, oily meals harms their fitness.They eat junk food,drink energy drinks, roasted meat, and other foods that contain high energy and high calories. i am not getting weight.although, i am outside my home through the day, i never like to take food in the hotels and restaurants. For example mother prepers a shedule for me which contains daily meals with low amount of fats and high number of protains and these dishes are part of my diet suchas, kidneybeans,chikensoup,boiledrice etc.My mom also advises me to take less sugar because sweets are one of the reasons that causes overweight in children. If children take less and low calorie diets,they will not get weight.
In addition, by playing sports children can avoid lazynees and sickness by involveing in sports like socer,cricket and running every day these few hours of Involvement in sports exerise will keep childern’s fit and healthy. This is because sports is better for both mantle and physical health.For example, when i was a child my father used to take me to playgrounds which was quite close to our home.First we would run for to 2 hours and then we would paly football for 1 hour,and finally we had a small yoga exersie.All these kinds of exercises kept us fit and active.
To sumup,children’s are getting over weight,where many people think govements are responsible for it. In my opinion parents are more to blame over govement because of they are responsible for their kids. However, small amount of atention for gaurdian towards their lovedone’s can change their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, so, then, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16568047337 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2519685659 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594674556213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
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Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616340139291 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820783808537 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106640813952 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897417501205 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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