Many people think studying in university is a waste of time and money. They are supposed that young people should work for real experience. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that studying at university is always taking their wealth and time in to vine and they supposed To go for practical work insert of going for education. I am totally disagree, because getting experienced in higher education is essential for getting well paid job and can go to abroad for further studies . I will discus in examples.
Firstly, to begin with pursuing study in higher level help pupils to get high paid job in their loved profession because they learned skill which are required to go for jobs. For example William martin of Serbia was very skill full mean but he was short of degree and was unable to get even a job in any company but after completing his studies he got job offer form IT company got paid doubled, that he was paid with skills. Thus the requirements of degree is always beneficial for students carrier to develop.
Secondly, studying masters form high ranked institution help students to go for Abroad for theirs further qualifications because going to other countries for education is help full for future. For instance to secure admission in commonwealth nations pupil must have A+ grads which allows them to enrolled in good university as well as can get scholarships as well . As the result working hard in studies at their living country enabled them to make their educational background more comfortable in Abroad.
In conclusion, learning at good university level can be beneficial in securing not only jobs but also form them who are dreaming to go abroad. Form my perspective governments should built more free higher institutions for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92988929889 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69308254281 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.697415328 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.454545455 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144360721209 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622821625861 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512205573107 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098718975358 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461202742564 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.