Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Many people believe that self learning in more easier than, while other think that touter is essential to learn. In my opinion hiring teacher to gain knowledge is important because learning become easy and fastest to learn.i will discus it in details.
In 21st century many learner think that ever one can learn by their self, while some consider that having teacher is important because mastering course become ease and can also helps every pupil to achieve their dream. For example, one of my friend was trying to pass css exam and he was doing self study but he fails couple of time than he joins tuition where he continue his classes for almost two months where he gains a lot of experience from tutors and after appearing third time for exam he got succeeded where he give all the credit to his teachers. Although learning from best is always help full.
In addition, every one can study by their self but teaching by perfects can be fastest way of schooling which saves time for many in mastering something. For instance when i was preparing for my ielts exam by self after taking exams for 3 times i didn't got my desire band ,because of which i lost many as well as my time but after joining ielts coaching i got band for which i was looking and was the electric way to learn for me.
To sum up, some people believe that studying by self is the better way, while others think that teacher is important to learn. From my perspective having teacher is must because it helps in saving time as well as tution become easy . Having teacher to learn is blessing for all
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ny people believe that self learning in more easier than, while other think that touter is ...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to become'
Suggestion: to become
...knowledge is important because learning become easy and fastest to learn.i will discus...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...arning become easy and fastest to learn.i will discus it in details. In 21st cen...
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Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun learner seems to be countable; consider using: 'many learners'.
Suggestion: many learners
... discus it in details. In 21st century many learner think that ever one can learn by their ...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...stering course become ease and can also helps every pupil to achieve their dream. For...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'continues'.
Suggestion: continues
... of time than he joins tuition where he continue his classes for almost two months where...
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Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... where he gains a lot of experience from tutors and after appearing third time fo...
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Line 2, column 521, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...time for exam he got succeeded where he give all the credit to his teachers. Althoug...
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Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he give all the credit to his teachers. Although learning from best is always help full....
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Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
.... Although learning from best is always help full. In addition, every one can stud...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...full. In addition, every one can study by their self but teaching by perfects c...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the fastest'.
Suggestion: be the fastest
...their self but teaching by perfects can be fastest way of schooling which saves time for m...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... mastering something. For instance when i was preparing for my ielts exam by self...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y self after taking exams for 3 times i didnt got my desire band ,because of which i ...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s for 3 times i didnt got my desire band ,because of which i lost many as well as ...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nt got my desire band ,because of which i lost many as well as my time but after ...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y time but after joining ielts coaching i got band for which i was looking and wa...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing ielts coaching i got band for which i was looking and was the electric way to...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...aving time as well as tution become easy . Having teacher to learn is blessing for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4965034965 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15536701371 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51048951049 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2579082408 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199266955131 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116856412711 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826560682077 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159375770606 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943225938449 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.