Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
Many people are migrating to english speaking countries and its impact on the society is very negative and can lead country to some bad consequences. Where as i believe that people moving to abroad because they looking for bright future and immigrating for people can harm our over all economy. I will discus it in details.
Migrating to commonwealth countries is normal now days for people and has a very major affect on societies as well. Students of universities are moving to abroad in very high number to educate their self from best universities in abroad and make their self able to find well paid job through which they can make their future more brighter. For example, friend of mine went to uk to complete his masters degree form london university after completing his studies he will get 3 years post study work visa to find jobs and will be able get settle their. Moving to abroad can be beneficial in many ways.
In addition migration to abroad can also be harmful for our nations in terms of economic areas which every Asian countries are facing now day, because of people leaving their birth countries and moving to abroad in search of better life style. For instance in a news paper was showing that according to FIA in last 18 months 223k nationals of Pakistan has moved to abroad in search of jobs and took a lot of money out of Pakistan which is very harmful for the economic growth of the country and can put Pakistan in economic problem.
In conclusion, maigration of people has an serious impact on society and can take us to some serious results as well. From my perspective, immigration need to be stop because it is totally destroying countries allover. Moving to other countries can be beneficial to people but it is worse for their countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68269230769 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50874333999 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6022827481 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111755993266 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522496770366 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409481607862 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868727504422 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526110508387 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.