Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many people think that living in countryside will have a good and healthy lifestyle, while on the other hand some people believe, that living in cities will have more benefits.From my prospective both views are beneficial in many good ways and for their wellbeing.
In current situations many around the world believe that spending life in countryside, will keep them fit as well as active. For example my family also belong to Orakzai village when ever i visit my hometown i wake-up early in the morning for exercise and for many other activities, such as swimming, cricket and to feed our animals in greenery where we also perform yoga classes and do some physical exercises, as well which keep’s us fully active.
On the other hand it is more than truth living in cities beneficial for healthy lifestyle as well, because cities are more reliable in trams of health care facilities having more developed hospitals. Such as in the city my uncle is living in has more equipped and more cleaner hospitals compere to countryside, however they are blessed with wide range staff of doctors and nurses and also facilitate with blood bank, more beds for patient’s.
In conclusion, lifestyle in countryside is more beneficial but health benefits which people having in cities outweigh. In my way of thinking life in countryside is more healthy as compered to city life. Everywhere people lives they just they are looking for good and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95884773663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60653381466 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547325102881 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6616084261 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.625 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.125 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280111772899 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138979375202 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950584534522 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182088034571 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896797451607 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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