Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Opinions are divided on whether living in the countryside or the cities is more beneficial for our health. In my opinion, even though there are a lot of advantages to living in the urban areas, it appears that life in the country has more positive impacts on humans’ overall well-being.
On the one hand, residing in the cities can provide a multitude of choices for physical, as well as mental healthcare. Firstly, sports facilities are more accessible and diverse for residents in the cities. People who want to work out and get in shape can choose between going to the gym, the swimming pool, or joining a pilates class nearby. In contrast, there appears to be a lack of sports facilities in the countryside, rendering it difficult for people to exercise. Secondly, there are more entertainment choices in the cities, which may help boost people’s mental well-being. After stressful hours at school or work, people can go shopping at the mall or go to the cinema to watch movies. It has been reported that taking a break from time to time can significantly reduce stress and depression, especially for office workers.
On the other hand, living in the countryside can have a great deal of positive effects on people’s health. One reason for this is because there is less pollution outside of the cities, which contributes to a cleaner and more peaceful environment. Therefore, residents can simply step outside of their houses and relax without having to pay expensive fees for entertainment services. Another health benefit of the country life is the space available for moving and exercising. There is less traffic outside of urban areas, so instead of going to the gym, people can jog or cycle to keep their bodies in shape.
In conclusion, although there are health benefits to both living in the city and the countryside, I believe that the clean and peaceful environment, as well as the open space outside of the urban areas are more suitable for people who are pursuing a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93529411765 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74729184048 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3332808399 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183410037137 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660077347203 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805569372382 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137744912683 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691062642558 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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