Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Because an immense amount of national funds are needed in order to restore infrastructure in central areas, some people are of the opinion that this money should be more well-spent if it is directed towards constructing new buildings and roads. In my opinion, it is best that government expenditure be allocated equally both to new and old infrastructure.
On the one hand, antique buildings are very valuable to the cities’ overall ambience, and they contribute greatly to the tourism of these areas. In Vietnam, Hoi An, a hotspot for international tourism, is well-known for its traditional atmosphere and its ancient style of architecture. Without the restoration of these infrastructure, Hoi An would lose its attraction and value, leading to a decrease in tourists. Not only do they serve as tourism attractions, old constructions can also reflect the nation’s culture, as well as its history. A lot of rundown buildings in Vietnam are a legacy from our ancestors who have fought for the nation’s freedom, and they are proof of Vietnamese people’s courage. Therefore, it is important that these legacy be restored and upheld for future generations to remember.
On the other hand, contemporary buildings are crucial to the cities’ urban development and technological advancement. Cities’ population is increasing at dramatic rates, and along with that are rising demands for transportation, education, and entertainment. Infrastructure such as roads, bridges, universities, cinemas and shopping malls which are built with state of the art technology can help raise citizens’ living standards, giving them a more comfortable and happy life. In addition, companies and businesses tend to select new buildings to base their office, as these locations provide ideal working conditions for their employees. Therefore, recently developed infrastructure can contribute greatly to employment rates and the national economy.
In conclusion, there should be a balance between government’s funding allocation for both antique buildings and future urban developments.
- Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries Why do young people choose to do so Who will benefit more young people or the communities 73
- In today s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge In the future job applicants may not need any formal qualifications To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget something after 'An'?
...tourism of these areas. In Vietnam, Hoi An, a hotspot for international tourism, is...
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Message: Did you mean 'this infrastructure' or 'these infrastructures'?
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Message: Did you mean 'this legacy' or 'these legacies'?
Suggestion: this legacy; these legacies
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Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66453674121 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3263711414 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610223642173 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0857247285 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.642857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20134859265 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676801019914 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511975966539 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130272788995 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057991317532 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.