Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to share the feedback of “The Dragon Heart” restaurant in my neighborhood. I would like you to publish the feedback in the dine out section which comes on Sunday. In this way, many foodies will get a chance to explore the delicious taste of this Chinese restaurant.
I went to this outlet last Friday with my friends to have Chinese cuisine. It is situated in the Model town part 3, just next to the green chick shop. The surroundings were tranquil and picturesque. The dining hall was spacious with excellent hospitality.
We ordered traditional Chinese dishes like Crispy vegetables and sizzlers. Before that, the staff served a complimentary soup which had a never forgetting taste because of its ingredients. Also, I must admit the food quality because it was freshly cooked.
I felt extremely happy and satisfied with the services of “ The Dragon Heart ” outlet, and I would like other people to go and try the tasty food in my area, especially for those who are foodies.
Thank you in Advanced.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81318681319 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60298102261 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 182.0 22.4926829268 809% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 876.0 112.824112599 776% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 182.0 22.9334400587 794% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130306019857 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130306019857 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750896886932 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06175031679 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 92.2 13.2329268293 697% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -104.79 61.2550243902 -171% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 73.1 10.3012195122 710% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.65 8.06136585366 207% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.4329268293 464% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 74.8 10.9970731707 680% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 11.0658536585 479% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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