You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.-Thank you friend for the holiday-Explain that you left your wallet in their house-Give them

Dear Jones,
Hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you that I left my wallet at your place during Christmas holidays. However, thankful for such a memorable gathering and also for a lovely welcoming. It was a great holiday that I ever had. You brought me to visit a lot of new places and sight seeing the downtown which was a great time for both of us which we have not seen each other for a year.
But, accidentally, I left my brown color wallet at your home which consists of my pan card, voters ID, visiting cards and some currencies notes.And I believe, my wallet is on the red cupboard in the room where I had stayed. Sorry for the inconvenience brought by me and it would be more grateful if you would ship my wallet to the address mentioned in the envelope.
Thanking you

Yours lovingly

Dora

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...Hope you and your family are doing well.I am writing this letter to inform you th...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , accidentally
...ch was a great time for both of us. But,accidentally, I left my brown color wallet at your h...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...isiting cards and some currencies notes.And I believe, my wallet is on the red cupb...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mentioned in the envelope. Thanking you Yours lovingly Dora
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Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...velope. Thanking you Yours lovingly Dora
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53793103448 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5964028899 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668965517241 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1501998261 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355036825348 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167255601503 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120235442489 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247130332723 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816402074253 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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