Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John and I regret to bring to your personal attention the inconvenience I faced due to the unprofessional behavior of your driver Mr. Raju.
On 1st February, 2014, I hired a car to travel to Mumbai. To my annoyance, I had to start two hours late as the driver did not arrive at the scheduled time and was not bothered either to attend my calls or apologize for the delay. Further to this, he was skeptical of the route, thus, frequently enquiring which was irritating me to the core. To add fuel to the fire, he was held by traffic police for more than two hours, as he failed to carry his license, vehicle registration papers, etc. when questioned, he reflected inexorable and eccentric attitude, thus corroborating my doubts that he was drunk. obviously, I had no choice, but to leave your car mid-way and hire another vehicle.
Since the public has high regard for your reputed service, I request you to analyze your organization's functioning to arrest the retrograding trend of the quality of your service.
Your swift action will help to rebuild the faith in your rental services.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret bringing'.
Suggestion: regret bringing
Dear Sir or Madam, I am John and I regret to bring to your personal attention the inconven...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'February 2014'.
Suggestion: February 2014
...havior of your driver Mr. Raju. On 1st February, 2014, I hired a car to travel to Mumbai. To ...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...nd my calls or apologize for the delay. Further to this, he was skeptical of the route,...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...roborating my doubts that he was drunk. obviously, I had no choice, but to leave your car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76119402985 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78733979576 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1980290053 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116687743006 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516810236078 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418185949096 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681226009752 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257037913999 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.