You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
• advise them of your situation
• explain how this is affecting you
• request a new card
Dear sir or madam,
I am Harry Martin, student of your prestigious institution, pursuing BACHELOR'S OF COMPUTER SCIENCE having roll number 0123456. Unfortunately, last week pickpocket had stolen my wallet that includes many essential cards including my student identity card. I am writing this letter to request you to issue me a new card.
Actually, I commute by local bus from college to school and last friday, when I reached home, I realised that someone has stolen my wallet. I immediately reported about the same at the nearest police station. As I lost my student ID card, I am unable to access the college library that is badly affecting my studies. Further, I am not able to obtain student bus pass because of no student id proof.
I request you to issue me a new card as soon as possible so that I can study well for my exams and also get a new bus pass that saves a lot of coveyance charges. For your reference, I enclosed a copy of police report that I registered.
Looking forward for a positive revert from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Harry Martin.
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| 2019-10-08 | harmankaur | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir or madam, I am Harry Martin, student of your prest...
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...us pass because of no student id proof. I request you to issue me a new card as ...
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...opy of police report that I registered. Looking forward for a positive revert fr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ert from you soon. Yours Sincerely Harry Martin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65852877702 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3847099165 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8181818182 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306840703126 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11133843237 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082364738883 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172175897743 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801077817946 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.