You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter:
Describe the problem
Say how long it has been a problem
Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.
Dear Sisya,
I am writing this to complain about you dumping garbage inside my compound and parking your car in front of my gate. I live in house number 533 which is next to your house. I am facing this problem for the past two months.
The cleaning lady of yours is throwing the garbage inside my compound where we maintain a garden for my family, it looks like she is doing this due to the rage of removing her from my house maintenance job and I am warning you that if any such behaviors is seen again, I am going to complain to the nearest police station under harassment case on you and your maid.
One more problem is that your family is parking in front of my gate - which is the only entry and exit to my house. Since your car is blocking our entry into the house due to which I was late to most of my office meetings and it is causing inconvenience to my family members.
I would request you to recommend your maid to be work in an ethical manner and your family should not park in front of my gate from this day.
I hope you understand my condition.
Thank you for considering my conditions.
Your's Sincerely,
Guru
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sisya, I am writing this to complain about you ...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...number 533 which is next to your house. I am facing this problem for the past two...
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Line 9, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r harassment case on you and your maid. One more problem is that your family is ...
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Line 13, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing inconvenience to my family members. I would request you to recommend your ma...
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Line 17, column 55, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an ethical manner" with adverb for "ethical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t you to recommend your maid to be work in an ethical manner and your family should not park in fron...
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Line 25, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hank you for considering my conditions. Yours Sincerely, Guru
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Line 29, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g my conditions. Yours Sincerely, Guru
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40465116279 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32270876231 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548837209302 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.7840896015 43.030603864 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 94.7 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14925117468 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788987598627 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284040120378 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926357480349 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222906884429 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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