You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter:
Describe the problem
Say how long it has been a problem
Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.
Dear Sisya,
I am writing this to complain about you dumping garbage inside my compound and parking your car in front of my gate. I live in house number 533 which is next to your house. I am facing this problem for the past two months.
The cleaning lady of yours is throwing the garbage inside my compound where we maintain a garden for my family. it looks like she is doing this due to the rage of removing her from my house maintenance job and I am warning you that if any such behaviors is seen again. I am going to complain to the nearest police station under harassment case on you and your maid.
One more problem is that your family is parking in front of my gate - which is the only entry and exit to my house. Since your car is blocking our entry into the house due to which I was late to most of my office meetings. it is causing inconvenience to me and my family members.
I would request you to recommend your maid to be work in an ethical manner and your family should not park in front of my gate from this day.
I hope you understand my condition.
Thank you for considering my conditions.
Your's Sincerely,
Guru
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...number 533 which is next to your house. I am facing this problem for the past two...
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Line 21, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ere we maintain a garden for my family. it looks like she is doing this due to the...
^^
Line 31, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is the only entry and exit to my house. Since your car is blocking our entry into the...
^^^^^
Line 31, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...was late to most of my office meetings. it is causing inconvenience to me and my f...
^^
Line 41, column 55, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an ethical manner" with adverb for "ethical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t you to recommend your maid to be work in an ethical manner and your family should not park in fron...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 5.60731707317 856% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74537037037 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33061298501 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5596692161 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8461538462 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149072435731 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685562361816 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349700448158 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925426255549 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224248557598 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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