Dear Rahul,
Good day! How are you? Hope you are healthy and okay. I am writing this letter to explain why i had to move from bridgend to manchester.
As you aware that i have been working with same company for the past 7 years and i got an unexpected offer with an promotion on place.They wanted someone who could join immediately so i had no other choice to move out of town .My house is located near seaview so from the balcony,the morning and evening view will be impressive and it has awesome football grounds nearby to my home.
I really do miss you on the weekends and am wondering if you could come over here next month, we can spend some quality time over here by playing football and roaming around this beautiful city.
Eagerly waiting to meet you.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
Dear Rahul, Good day! how are you? hope you are healthy and okay....
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Rahul, Good day! how are you? hope you are healthy and okay. I am writing ...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I am writing this letter to explain why i had to move from bridgend to manchester...
^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h same company for the past 7 years and i got an unexpected offer with an promoti...
^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ears and i got an unexpected offer with an promotion on place.They wanted someone ...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...pected offer with an promotion on place.They wanted someone who could join immediate...
^^^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d someone who could join immediately so i had no other choice to move out of town...
^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... had no other choice to move out of town .My house is located near seaview so from...
^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...ad no other choice to move out of town .My house is located near seaview so from t...
^^
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...located near seaview so from the balcony,the morning and evening view will be impres...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... really do miss you on the weekends and am wondering if you could come over here n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49655172414 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2965620793 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.758620689655 0.547539520022 139% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 124.531940006 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214762400991 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119632187932 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389601575173 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127052102088 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471705467101 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.