04/11/2017Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:– describe the problem with the dog– explain why it is important for you to sleep– outline what your neighbours could d

Dear Marcus,

I am writing to you to bring to your attention that the issue which i am having because of your dog during night.

As you may be already aware of, your dog has been wandering neighborhood at nights, urinating my fences and digging hole in my garden.Yet, the worst thing is barking loud at nights and because of that i was awoken several times lately. I had even consulted a doctor and had prescribed some sleeping pills.

I wouldn't bring this to you notice if i hadn't been in middle of exams, but since i am, it is crucial for me to take rest and sleep properly in the night to do the exams well.

I would be grateful if your dog can be locked inside your house after evening hours, so that i may not face any further problems.

Thank you for taking time to read this, expecting a good news from you.

Yours sincerely,
Karthik.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
... to your attention that the issue which i am having because of your dog during ni...
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Suggestion: Yet
...my fences and digging hole in my garden.Yet, the worst thing is barking loud at nig...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...king loud at nights and because of that i was awoken several times lately. I had ...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...ad prescribed some sleeping pills. I wouldnt bring this to you notice if i hadnt bee...
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Suggestion: hadn't
...I wouldnt bring this to you notice if i hadnt been in middle of exams, but since i am...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...adnt been in middle of exams, but since i am, it is crucial for me to take rest a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y in the night to do the exams well. I would be grateful if your dog can be lo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...your house after evening hours, so that i may not face any further problems. T...
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Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...for taking time to read this, expecting a good news from you. Yours sincerely, Karthik....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43396226415 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30725908471 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691823899371 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6114101575 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308146911203 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134468892361 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594790580659 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156191117728 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615119823332 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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