04/11/2017
Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
– describe the problem with the dog
– explain why it is important for you to sleep
– outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.
Dear Ms. and Mr. Smith,
I am your neighbor downstairs and write to complain about the noise created by your pet. The dog often barks without any apparent reason in the middle of the night. I assume the dog is kept right in a room above me because the bark is astonishingly loud and clean. Moreover, the creature likes to jump and run around. Those actions are clearly heard in my apartments and I cannot sleep well.
In fact, my therapist says: if I continue having problems with rest and sleep, the appearance of illnesses and health problems is almost inevitable. Furthermore, I work as a surgeon and my job requires from me to alert and focused but because of the noise from your flat, I cannot sleep and it has started to affect my performance.
There are several actions that can be done about this situation. There are services available that may train your pet to behave well. If it is too expensive, you can do it yourself as well. If the expected results are not achieved within a month, you may give your pet to a local shelter where the vets will take care of it. Otherwise, I will complain to your landlord and the community committee.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 220 250
No. of Characters: 975 1200
No. of Different Words: 136 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.432 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.438 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.729 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.637 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65909090909 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53577298434 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9059320724 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2142857143 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254961718775 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727575586955 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425297684033 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115683574399 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589508857429 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.