You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart provides insights into different kinds of export earnings of one nation from five product categories between 2015 and 2016. And, the table gives information about how the proportion of each category of exports altered in 2015 and 2016.
Looking from an overall perspective, it can be seen that in both 2015 and 2016, petroleum products dominated the groups of export earnings, while textiles are negatively correlated. Most products showed an upward trend from 2015 to 2016, barring gems and jewelry.
In detail, export earnings from petroleum products went up slightly from 61 billion dollars in 2015 to 63 billion dollars in the following year, which was roughly a 3% increase over a year. Also, a similar trend could be observed in engineered goods, with nearly 8.5% of the increasing percentage. In 2015, export revenue in engineered goods account for approximately 58% before climbing up to 62% and ranked the second position, following petroleum products.
Turning to the other product categories, textiles were the lowest-earning sources, with only 26% in 2015, after experiencing an upsurge, they constituted nearly 32% in 2015. Moreover, in 2015 and 2016, earnings from agricultural goods had no change, standing at 31%. The opposite was seen in gems and jewelry. Specifically, in 2015, revenue from gems and jewelry was 43% and decelerated to 41% in 2016.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as 43% and decelerated to 41% in 2016. .
^^
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s 43% and decelerated to 41% in 2016. .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25112107623 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80106447855 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4054280077 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.454545455 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271897938072 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113586933378 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855558219999 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184564969842 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983493230976 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.