The charts depict the differences of the age structure between France and India populations in 1984.
As can be seen from two charts, the India population was younger than that of France.
First, for the young age group, the number of males and females in India was exceed than of France. Turning more details, for those aged from 0-15, the number of people in France was fewer than India both in male and female with the former occupying approximately 3.5% and the latter taking up around 6.5%. Another point taking into concern is that in the middle group, there was a similar trend in two countries with approximately 3.5-4% in both females and males for those aged 20-40. On the contract, for the elderly group, the French's inhabitant was higher than the India population. Specifily, in the age of 40-45, the number people in India was overwhelmed than France by 1%. Last but not least, there were a lot of people who aged more than 70 years in France which was not happened in India.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'exceeded'.
Suggestion: exceeded
...umber of males and females in India was exceed than of France. Turning more details, f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...France which was not happened in India.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66285714286 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32541240582 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.886565567 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153056983094 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922024666653 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624522951669 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140554612642 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843373431598 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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