You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the rate of air pollution for three different reasons namely electricity generation, transportation, and industry in four countries of the world in 2021.
Overall, the highest level of air pollution can be seen in China, while Australia reports the lowest for all causes of pollutions. the general trend is showing industrial development is the predominant contributor of the air pollution for all the nations except for America, where transport constitutes the most.
China and Japan are showing a similar pattern of pollution in regard to the causation although at different levels. The industrial pollution level is the highest in Chana at 80 PPM whereas Japan has literally just over half of it. Likewise, only 30 PPM is recorded for Japan from the transport sector, while China is just over doubled the number. The remaining category which is electricity generation is 60 PPM for China and Japan has a mere 15 PPM.
Coming to the Other two countries, America has noticed more air pollution than Australia for all three causes. The pollution rate from transportation is just below 60 PPM in the US which is almost double of electricity generation and industry. On the other hand, for Australia, all the causes of polluted air are just reported under 20 PPM.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion:
...is 60 PPM for China and Japan has a mere 15 PPM. Coming to the Other two count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, except for, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0985915493 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86861759664 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525821596244 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0827349095 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140860154961 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679952019232 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522004394285 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105186808889 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412953444093 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.