You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
In the statistics table, we can easily see that the numbers of local students is very much higher than overseas students, even in commencing or total.
In commencing,the number of overseas students from 2001 to 2005 is much lower than local students.However, that numbers was increased more and more. Besides, the number of local students was not increased too much.
In total, the increasing of overseas students was higher than its commencing.However, opposed to the increasing of overseas students, the increasing of local students was still develop, but not really much.And from 2007 to 2010, the increasing of local students stopped, its number was 6 hundred millions students.And up to 2008. the total number of overseas students was higher than local students and it still thrives.
In short, we can see that, with the developments of international communication language over the world, the number of overseas students has been and is developing very much!!!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...in commencing or total. In commencing,the number of overseas students from 2001 t...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... 2005 is much lower than local students.However, that numbers was increased more and mo...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...students was higher than its commencing.However, opposed to the increasing of overseas ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
... increasing of local students was still develop, but not really much.And from 2007 to 2...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... was still develop, but not really much.And from 2007 to 2010, the increasing of lo...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... number was 6 hundred millions students.And up to 2008. the total number of oversea...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ndred millions students.And up to 2008. the total number of overseas students was h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, really, still, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33766233766 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13299407605 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.6417286108 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158492530106 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111746139818 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333678874346 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109533060439 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256040338609 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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