You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by
selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph delineates how the population of the people varies on the Paris Metro Station in accordance with the timings of the day.
Overall, it can be inferred that, the significant rise in population is observed at 8:30 am and 6:30 pm. However, the range of the passengers utilizing metro accounts the least at 6:30 am, 4:30 pm, 8:30 pm and 10:30 pm.
During the daytime, the amount surges from 6:30 am to 8:30 am comprising 100 to 400 people. On the contrary, the number drops to almost the half that was augmented that is approximately 200 till 11:30 am. Whereas, the amount merely grows by 100 people and remains stable till 2:30 pm. The sudden drop in the amount of 100 people is experienced until the evening time(4:30 pm).
In the evening time, the trend of depletion suddenly changes and the level soars to 400 people again until 6:30 pm. Although, the amount experienced accretion for some period, from 6:30 pm to 8:30 pm it starts to fall by 300 people. While, at night time, it varies from 100 to 200 people in between 8:30 pm and 10:30 pm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...me, the amount surges from 6:30 to 8:30 am comprising of 100 to 400 people. On the...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: COMPRISING_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
... the amount surges from 6:30 to 8:30 am comprising of 100 to 400 people. On the contrary, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5873015873 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38507579455 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.875767698 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0416675325473 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229098208725 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368423425172 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453199234809 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454725604751 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.