You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent
on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten
in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The pie chart illustrates what the households allocated their food expenditure, while the line chart shows how people choose fastfood and sitdown restaurant meals separately during the survey time between 1970 to 2000.
Overall, while the percentage of the home cooking decreased significantly, the proportion of restaurant meals increased dramatically. The line figure saw the number of meals per year(NMPY) experienced increases in both fastfood meals and sitdown restaurant meals during the whole survey period.
In the survey, nearly 90% of the food budget spent on home cooking in 1970, so it was clearly to play a dominant part in the food expense. However, the figure declined sharply, dropping to 50% in 2000. At the same time, the percentage of food expense spent on restaurant meals grew steadily from 10% in 1970 to 35% in 1990, eventually sharing the same figure(half a percent) with the home cooking.
In addition, in 1970, it was clearly to say that both the NMPY of fastfood and the NMPY of sitdown restaurant was same(about 20), but the NMPY of fastfood grew exponetially to approximately 85 in 2000. This figure was nearly 45 larger than the NMPY of sitdown restaurant meals, even though the NMPY of sitdown reastaurant meals(nearly 35) overtook the other pattern(about 29) at 1980.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16267942584 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8220337442 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535885167464 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7833604241 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.142857143 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221799752941 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108135279136 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062521185234 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127833030432 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593830184591 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.