You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts show the number of meals of three particular types of nutrients in the US.
Overall, the most significant difference for use in meal is in the sodium and added sugar. it is worth to notice that dinner and snacks are the most dangerous meals for people's health since they have huge quantity of these elements.
According to the given data, snacks have the lowest percentage of sodium, about 14%. that of the added sugar was 3 times for sodium, with about 42%, which make it become the highest rate used this element. By contrast, while dinner has the highest percentage of using sodium, dinner used added sugar have almost the lowest percentage, about 23%.
Through the period, the rate of breakfast and lunch remained constant. The breakfast has the least consumption, with about 16% of each categories. That of the lunch is about 25%
In conclusion, dinner and snacks used the considerable percentage of elements, which are more unhealthiest than other groups of meal in USA.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... meal is in the sodium and added sugar. it is worth to notice that dinner and snac...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...lowest percentage of sodium, about 14%. that of the added sugar was 3 times for sodi...
^^^^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... lunch remained constant. The breakfast have the least consumption, with about 16% o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'unhealthiest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: unhealthiest
...rable percentage of elements, which are more unhealthiest than other groups of meal in USA.
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hiest than other groups of meal in USA.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91715976331 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48854382931 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4512728356 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118462542135 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560470330772 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468269276807 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767109233267 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048458261392 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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