The provided bar graph enumerates the data of advance writing for prepare assingments by undergraduate learner's in three dissimilar years at a university.The data is calibrated in percentum.
The highlighted feature of the graph reveals that
ball pen had been handed over the dominant position whereas fountain pens were the least.
It is explicity observed that ball pen had been used by most of the students in 1970 to 1982.The ratio was near about: 50 nd 60 respectively.Afterthat it fall down nd reached to 5
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: truc0207
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
... three dissimilar years at a university.The data is calibrated in percentum. Th...
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...he data is calibrated in percentum. The highlighted feature of the graph reveal...
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...ighted feature of the graph reveals that ball pen had been handed over the domina...
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...by most of the students in 1970 to 1982.The ratio was near about: 50 nd 60 respecti...
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Suggestion: Afterthat
...o was near about: 50 nd 60 respectively.Afterthat it fall down nd reached to 5
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Suggestion: falls
...out: 50 nd 60 respectively.Afterthat it fall down nd reached to 5
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...y.Afterthat it fall down nd reached to 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 438.0 965.302439024 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 85.0 196.424390244 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15294117647 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.03637027671 3.73543355544 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43166609389 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 106.607317073 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.741176470588 0.547539520022 135% => OK
syllable_count: 127.8 283.868780488 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.9920619918 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155367359989 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912574009805 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417635517298 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817269614739 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516597037842 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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