I am a graphics designer working remotely for my clients in Europe. I bought a laptop from your company six months ago with one year warranty. I work for longer hours at home and frequently use Adobe Photoshop. Recently, with the onset of summers I am getting overheating problems with the device. it was mentioned to me, that the laptop has a heat sink as well as a fan to manage processor temperature efficiently. However, within an hour of working on the computationaly expensive software, the laptop heats to the extent that I cannot continue working on my projects, regardless of the fact that i maintain the room temperature to 20 degrees celsius. I am unable to meet my deadlines and focus on the requirements of my clients, as i get disrupted and my laptop needs a break of 20 minutes to cool down. My delivery of projects ad performance has fallen to a great extent due to this issue.
As mentioned earlier my laptop is in warranty, so I would like you to fix this heating problem at your service shop. Furthermore, if the problem cannot be fixed my laptop may be replaced. I would be thankful if you help me out of this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53398058252 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83475195468 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5629466136 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210213682866 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874000716837 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728392865782 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174375881104 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278696394376 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.