01/11/2017
Write a letter to an airline manager to find out about something you forgot on the plane during your travel. In your letter
– give details about your flight
– describe the item you forgot
– explain why it is important that you get it back
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am a loyal client of your airline for almost ten years by now and I am writing to ask you about a favor. On 29th October 2017, I flew from Moscow to New York by Airbus A320, flight number NG40R10 in the first class. My seat number was A10.
With me, I had a workstation Lenovo W540p with a 4K display. Unfortunately, the airplane landed with an hour delay because of the inclement weather conditions. In a hurry, I forgot my laptop in the cabin. The computer is black and has a sticker on the surface that states: “this machine kills fascists”. The workstation was put in a big red with white straps case. The case is really colorful, I think you will identify it quickly.
I would like to get my equipment back because the retail price of such a laptop is about three and a half thousand dollars. Moreover, some sensitive data is stored on a hard drive of the computer. There is not only information about the project on which I work but also many personal data such as photographs and videos that are valuable for me and that do not have copies. I hope that you can help me to solve this problem.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk
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Essay evaluation report
With me, I had a workstation Lenovo W540p with a 4K display.
descriptions: two 'with' in one sentence
The workstation was put in a big red with white straps case.
The workstation was put in a big red case with white straps.
There is not only information about the project on which I work but also many personal data such as photographs and videos
There are not only information about the project on which I work but also many personal data such as photographs and videos
that are valuable for me and that do not have copies.
descriptions: two 'that' in one sentence
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 223 250
No. of Characters: 943 1200
No. of Different Words: 149 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.864 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.229 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.35 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.267 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.235 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.608 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madame, I am a loyal client of your airline for ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ut in a big red with white straps case. The case is really colorful, I think you wi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5067264574 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57188864313 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663677130045 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4532668596 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174574702331 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446145289034 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503950811456 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791308189228 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520391940323 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.